What do you think?

I just got an e-mail as a follow-up for my RA interview. It asked three questions; what was your favorite part, what part made you the most uncomfortable, and what is one last thing you want to leave with us?

Here is my answer to the last question:

"The final thought I want to leave you with is this. Behrend was not my first choice- I will be moving on to University Park for my Junior year. But I have decided that even though this is not what I had planned, I want to really, truly live here while I am at Behrend. I want to feel at home, and make friends, and really get the best out of this experience. Most importantly, I know that the best way to commit to a place is to give something to it, and I think that I have so much to offer as an RA. I don't want these two years to be just a means to an end, and I don't want a job that is just for the paycheck. I want to truly live here, and I think becoming an RA is the best way for me to achieve that."

I hope it's good, because I've already sent it. I think it's good, but it still feels risky. What do you think?